tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774363178370829558.post4756169034231049441..comments2024-03-20T02:49:17.606-07:00Comments on Between Fact and Fiction: How I Use CritsNatalie Whipplehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09978251567306345129noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774363178370829558.post-86655524742808417452010-06-24T13:15:10.900-07:002010-06-24T13:15:10.900-07:00"So I edit for myself, solving the problems r..."So I edit for myself, solving the problems raised in my own way."<br /><br />Love that line. Definitely wise advice.erica_henryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11576621292231389312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774363178370829558.post-16661148280807528302010-06-22T05:13:43.622-07:002010-06-22T05:13:43.622-07:00I read the whole thing and then motor through it s...I read the whole thing and then motor through it start to finish. On rare occasions, I'll highlight something I just can't figure out how to fix and come back to it later.<br /><br />Yeah, I'm boring.Carrie Harrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14893023777471521703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774363178370829558.post-43907792502782842992010-06-22T04:06:28.501-07:002010-06-22T04:06:28.501-07:00For the more major changes, if I'm not sure I ...For the more major changes, if I'm not sure I agree, I consider more the ones that more than one person suggested. I tend to look at the critiques as I revise so I can do all the revisions at the same time. It usually takes me at least two revisions to get it right. And like you, I often get that I'm doomed and I'll never get it right feelings in the pit of my stomachNatalie Aguirrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03756087804171246660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774363178370829558.post-70166162210390239212010-06-21T23:02:10.168-07:002010-06-21T23:02:10.168-07:00I have a similar process. I normally to the quick...I have a similar process. I normally to the quick easy grammar fixes. Then I think through the other fixes. Sometimes I need time to let the sting of some of the comments wear off, so that I can see more clearly what I can do to fix the problem. But ultimately, anything that I do change I make sure it is something I agree with. Not something I'm changing just because one person thought it didn't work.Amber Lynaehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16890268873178010212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774363178370829558.post-11864088913779877922010-06-21T20:48:36.946-07:002010-06-21T20:48:36.946-07:00Yeah, I typically start off with the typos, it mak...Yeah, I typically start off with the typos, it makes for a good laugh. Has anyone done a complete book of hilarious typos yet?Kathryn Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05270893925385208665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774363178370829558.post-20242233987063123262010-06-21T20:29:07.724-07:002010-06-21T20:29:07.724-07:00No wait. I do them like Nick said. Forget mine.No wait. I do them like Nick said. Forget mine.Adam Heinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02225813532455467868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774363178370829558.post-37117586184913403952010-06-21T20:28:01.367-07:002010-06-21T20:28:01.367-07:00I tend to do Major Problems first, anything whose ...I tend to do Major Problems first, anything whose fix will mess with continuity (like removing a character). Then I do a read-through and deal with all other comments chapter-by-chapter.<br /><br />But otherwise I treat the crits like you do, right down to the nagging pit.Adam Heinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02225813532455467868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774363178370829558.post-75340085699753961662010-06-21T17:41:34.901-07:002010-06-21T17:41:34.901-07:00I also put away crits after reading. Then, before ...I also put away crits after reading. Then, before I submit, I'll look over them again. Cuts back on the DOOMED thinking for me too. :)Samantha Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15712749844855298929noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774363178370829558.post-47868357563148126712010-06-21T16:17:44.685-07:002010-06-21T16:17:44.685-07:00Crits are a HUGE part of my editing process. I ha...Crits are a HUGE part of my editing process. I have a learning disability and it makes it hard for me to catch grammar mistakes and the tiny detail things. I normally go through, fix any comments people make, like "this line doesn't sound realistic." Then I also tackle the BIG stuff, anything that involves rewrites. <br />Then after that is done, I pass it off to someone else and the process repeats again. Until I hit what I think is 100%.<br />I'm not there yet. I"ll let you know.Erinnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13936046127305211439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774363178370829558.post-88789236857021471662010-06-21T15:53:00.890-07:002010-06-21T15:53:00.890-07:00Ohhhh crits, best served with a Vorpal weapon!Ohhhh crits, best served with a Vorpal weapon!Nickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10126561808521998532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774363178370829558.post-51583404724380971052010-06-21T14:52:42.626-07:002010-06-21T14:52:42.626-07:00See, now, I thought I was the only one that did it...See, now, I thought I was the only one that did it this way! First I upload it all to the brain, let it cook a bit, and then march through the edit, letting the bits fall back through one by one.<br /><br />I DO go back after I'm all done, just making sure that I caught all the crits that I meant to.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing! :)Susan Kaye Quinnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07348197999397141067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774363178370829558.post-36992171847890221522010-06-21T13:55:20.034-07:002010-06-21T13:55:20.034-07:00I like your method. Too often I've edited to m...I like your method. Too often I've edited to make OTHERS happy but it's left my work feeling voice-less and meaningless to me. Not a good combo.<br /><br />When it comes to the bigger comments, especially those "nagging pits" like you said, I like to go through all the crits and see if more than two people had the same thought. If they did, then I'll mull and consider and see how I can fix it. But if it's only one person who had the problem, then I'll usually ignore it (unless I have that gut reaction thing that tells me the person's right).<br /><br />I don't want to make the same mistake again of editing out my own voice/story.ali crosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13023009704454279645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774363178370829558.post-18947735584164642092010-06-21T13:17:19.258-07:002010-06-21T13:17:19.258-07:00Jamie, oh, I'm not talking line edits. I do sa...Jamie, oh, I'm not talking line edits. I do save line edits for last. I'm talking typos, like when I have "ninjustu" instead of "ninjutsu." <br /><br />If I don't get those quick, I tend to forget. But even so, I don't do this on the first draft. I'm, uh, like on draft 15 with this baby...Natalie Whipplehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09978251567306345129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774363178370829558.post-52607495792145734122010-06-21T13:05:03.338-07:002010-06-21T13:05:03.338-07:00How do I handle feedback?
1. Fix typos, and feel...How do I handle feedback? <br /><br />1. Fix typos, and feel stupid for making them.<br /><br />After that, it goes much like the 5 stages of grief.<br /><br />I DENY that the critiques could be right. I love my MS; it's shiny and perfect. So there.<br /><br />I get ANGRY at the audacity of people who think it's not perfectly shiny. Losers!<br /><br />I try and make myself a DEAL by saying I'll at least consider the crits that somehow make more sense than they did the day before. How'd that happen?<br /><br />I get DEPRESSED because there are A LOT of good suggestions. My book sux. Where's my shredder? Delete key, you are my new favorite friend.<br /><br />I ACCEPT that it's my book and ultimately my vision. I won't be happy with everything others want in or out of it just like not everyone will be happy with what I choose to include or leave out or how I treat my characters. I can live imperfect if it's the right story for me to tell.Josin L. McQueinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05751043333147850336noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774363178370829558.post-65741031216460039802010-06-21T12:39:20.994-07:002010-06-21T12:39:20.994-07:00Interesting how at least a couple of you work crit...Interesting how at least a couple of you work crits from line-edits to big picture issues. I took a course this past spring on revisions, and one of the smartest things the instructor said was to leave the line-edits (typos, spelling, grammar, etc) until last. Because when you're editing the structural stuff, some of those words and issues will just be deleted anyways, so it's inefficient to fix them first - a waste of time. So I leave those until last - makes sense to me. <br /><br />I read through crit comments, make note of the big issues and then, like you, I close the crits and just work on solving the problems in my own way. Then I go back and do line-edits before sending it out again. Theoretically. <br /><br />I'm in the line-edit stage at the moment with one wip, and a rewrite stage with the other.Jamie D.https://www.blogger.com/profile/05486427517423813962noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774363178370829558.post-51006218058102143102010-06-21T12:37:58.136-07:002010-06-21T12:37:58.136-07:00I haven't been in your situation too often (or...I haven't been in your situation too often (or, um, ever) but I'm going to have to take note of your method for when I do. It sounds pretty good to me. :)Kristanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04771013578685419826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774363178370829558.post-64346704013048228422010-06-21T12:32:22.622-07:002010-06-21T12:32:22.622-07:00This has to be the best way to handle crits I'...This has to be the best way to handle crits I've heard so far. Look at them, make note of it and put it away. It seems so straightforward and the best way to do things. <br /><br />Why didn't I think of it?Melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12096764010151024050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774363178370829558.post-2816842999744778852010-06-21T12:24:42.944-07:002010-06-21T12:24:42.944-07:00This sounds like a fantastic way to handle crits a...This sounds like a fantastic way to handle crits and I'll definitely keep it in mind when I get there. Thanks for sharing! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12294516011395206412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774363178370829558.post-37075161878798483672010-06-21T12:22:46.798-07:002010-06-21T12:22:46.798-07:00I'm similar in that I do all the typos/grammat...I'm similar in that I do all the typos/grammatical fixes first, mainly because I can go through the entire draft pretty quickly and feel like I've actually accomplished something. <br /><br />The bigger issues I tend to sleep on and usually have an idea by morning about how to tackle it. Sometimes my crit partners have suggested things that were in the back of my mind, but I hadn't done them because it would have involved extensive re-writes. So I suck it up and do the re-writes-- and end up so much happier with the book. I can't even say how much I love my crit partners--they rock! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05255908019822363456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5774363178370829558.post-32003011222073927802010-06-21T12:19:50.600-07:002010-06-21T12:19:50.600-07:00I especially agree with: "So I edit for mysel...I especially agree with: "So I edit for myself, solving the problems raised in my own way." It's the truest way to maintain your art while still tackling problems that arise. :)<br /><br />One thing I also note are the points my critters say are done well. If I excel at one thing, I try to incorporate that method into my weaker writing areas.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com